I am going to work on my ad analysis paper because I feel that it lacked a lot of evidence to support the thesis. I feel that my paper could have been better if I could have had better explanations. What I did right was that I had a good conclusion because I restated everything. Also, I had a good format.
What I need to do is I have to delete all my evidence because they lack information. I have to chose evidence that supports my thesis. I have to work with my thesis because that is what makes my whole paper. My thesis tells the reader what my paper is going to be about and if my evidence does not support it then my whole paper is wrong.
Second, I have to work on explaining my evidence because some people my not understand what it means. I write certain things because they make sense to me without thinking if other people can understand it. I have get in the habit that not everybody is the same. Therefore, I have to explain my evidence and tell the audience why it is important. I cant just put my evidence without explaining it because if the audience does not understand it than my evidence is weak and worthless.
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